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In S.E. Hinton's 'Outsiders' characters make decisions because of events that took place prior to that moment that connect like a chain. But once they make a decision, it doesn't stop there. These decisions become events and what's the result...more events. Ponyboy walks alone...Ponyboy& Johnny are on the run after Johnny kills the Soc. You would've never thought these two events in 'The Outsiders' had anything to do with each other. Hard to bekieve how much opposites attract. Want to know how these two events are chained together? Let's find out.
At first i was confused but after reading it a second time, I understand how you are trying to show the drastic change in events in the story but i think it could've been put together better. Use transitional words and phrases to show the change in the story.
ReplyDeleteit's good but what happened to the thesis and how did you post it?!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Stepanie. Great ideas, but it would be fantastic if you would piece them together in a more flowing way. It seems to me like a lot of good information, but in a way that is a bit disorganized. But great start!
ReplyDeleteInteresting way to spell "believe". 3rd to last sentence.
ReplyDeletehaha just kidding.
ReplyDeleteKyam, I think there's a lot here...probably too much. I rather you impress me with your knowledge than with your words! :)
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