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Wednesday, October 20, 2010

NEW AND IMPROVED THESIS

People in life face many challenging obstacles, like a mountain blocking your way in the middle of no where. There is no where else to go... There are secrets, friendship, and a mystery undefined. In what kind of book can you find all of this chaos? Well the book is The Amanda Project, by Stella Lennon. Though on the cover of the book, the author says Stella Lennon but in the back, it says that Melissa Kantor really wrote this book, so who is Stella Lennon? Just like in The Amanda Project, Amanda is considered undefined. She is no where to be found and the obstacles she puts her "friends" through are tremendously mysterious and frightening. Amanda Valentino has been missing for over a month. She didn't talk to much people, though she was far from shy. Amanda goes to a different school every year and appears missing. In every school she finds three people to be her "guide"... I believe that Amanda wanted Callie, Nia and Hal to get along and learn to trust each other. She wanted this because she wants them to work as a team and try to find Amanda. Some reasons to support my idea is that Amanda has been leaving secret letters to each one of the kids and somehow Amanda found out about ALL their personal life. Amanda leaves the letters and other clues and somehow makes the friends trust each other and is "forced" to tell them EVERYTHING! No secrets will be hid from Amanda Valentino.


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7 comments:

  1. ya no kinding but still it's good

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  2. THANK YOU! I WORKED HARD... lol :P

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  3. lol! i would write something else but i cant. wow! i just skimmed through it cause its too long for my brain. lol. but besides that it sound really good.

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  4. ... -_- i think its a bit too long for a intro dont u thinkk?

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  5. Great beginning. Also add an s to friendship in the second sentence

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  6. It is too long for an intro. You kinda told me the whole book.

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