Thursday, October 21, 2010
The Cartel
Sometimes things we admire in characters influence the qualities or characters within ourselves. In Ashley & JaQuavis novel The Cartel, a main character Miamor really leaves an impression on the reader. Her demeanor and overall attitude towards life, as well as her actions allow one to think more creatively and crafty.
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Very nice. I like the way you draw in the reader by talking in an almost personal way. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAlso, in my opinion I think you should try to elaborate a bit more. But good start regardless!
ReplyDeleteElaborate like how?
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I think it's fine the way it is.
ReplyDeleteI mean to try to add more words in it. I think it is fine, but I think to make it better, you should add more. But I dont know, that's just my opinion. It's really great the way it is.
ReplyDeleteP.S. try to add an ending. Good information, but no way to tie it up before the body of the essay.
ReplyDeleteI believe Stephanie will be talking about the characters attitude in the second paragraph followed by details, and then in the third she will be talking about her actions. Correct?
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