The setting often affects us in life whether or not we realize it. It may make us modest, conceited, open-minded or hard-headed. It affects our moods and attributes, but most importantly, life. In Fallen by Lauren Kate, Lucy is constantly depressed by the death-stricken walls and the stench of rot and mold.
Do you think it's too technical?
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ReplyDeletethat is aswome now if i could post i could show you mine, anyone know and don't tell me to go to new post because i already don't have it.
ReplyDeletehey! ur thesis is really good! it has that kind of descriptive language :)
ReplyDeleteThis is Selena's mother. To post, you have to first accept the invite sent by your teacher to your email inbox. Then you either have to sign in if you already have a google account, or createa new google account. Have fun reading guys!
ReplyDeleteThanks Selena's mom!! It's always nice to have parents involved!! Thank for your help.
ReplyDeletePS: Selena, your intro is great!! you can start working on your second paragraph.
ReplyDeleteVery good intro.I suggest to beef it up and elaborate more.
ReplyDeleteI dont understand the rot and mold part.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you mean by technical?
ReplyDeleteWhat i meant by technical was not descriptive enough or to straight forward. Besides this is my thesis statement, if elaborate more on just that, there will be no need to read the rest of my essay.
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