Hello my name is Tavon Hines and I'm about to write my Thesis. Did you ever have a time in your life when you was stranded in the middle of an forest with no kits or anything to survive?
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ReplyDeleteI like it. It seemed like you had a connection with your thesis. Great job!
ReplyDeletei think i know which book you're talking about..
ReplyDeletei think your open sentence should be interesting but yet a little broad so that the reader will want to read more.
I think the thesis is too specific. You should be speaking of characters and obstacles, not asking people if they've ever been stranded. Try again.
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