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This personally is a very good thesis nice job. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is an very good thesis and introduction
ReplyDeleteI think that for your 2 paragraph you should include details of how the father's running away effected the children
ReplyDeleteThanks Tavon and Andrea. But I think I'm going to try to make it longer cause its kinda short. I think your right Andrea, thanks for the support.
ReplyDeleteI think the thesis is tooshort also but other than that I love it
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