77 Spartan Ave
Staten Island,New York 10303
347-465-0717
XxEzaLokita97Xx@aol.com
10/24/2010
Mrs.Tosto
title: what do i put?
Mustang Exchange
11 Clove Lakes Place
Staten Islnad,New York 10303
Dear Mrs. Tosto
I am applying for Sales Representative. You must be asking why should you hire me? Well i am a very good worker. i know that this job is very impotent because we have to do things on time and get it done. Although this job requires to collect and hand-out things i can manage that. We can meet at anytime so we can discus more.
I am writing to you because i am very interested in this Sales Representative job you are offering. I found this job at my school I.S. 27 and i got intrested in it.
-_- wendy! i think that u shouldnt put ur address... u kno the internet.... lol :P
ReplyDeletei enjoyed reading your cover letter but i'm a better sales representative....lol
ReplyDeleteWendy, you need to look back at the sample. .There should be about 4 paragraphs total. Also please go back and check forget spelling and grammar ; there are a lot of mistakes.
ReplyDeleteOk mrs.Tosto i did fix it and it is much better. and SURE Jordan you are better ... lols if you say so x)
ReplyDeleteI was about to say the same thing as Ms. Tosto... its too short and you should put more about your experiance, and you must put a closing. For example;sincerely, from...etc. Definitely check grammer and spelling.
ReplyDeleteps. its selena lol