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Thursday, October 28, 2010
My intoduction
At some point in life people have emotions that could effect them in a positive or negative way. In Alyson Noels novel Evermore, Ever Bloom is having a mixture of emotions that is effecting her personality and her actions.
You did a great job of writing your entire intro, but I think you should write in your next 2 paragraphs how her mixture of emotions is effectivg her personailty and her actions. :)
I think that is a great intro! Good thesis too.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job of writing your entire intro, but I think you should write in your next 2 paragraphs how her mixture of emotions is effectivg her personailty and her actions. :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Cristina but great paragraph GREAT JOB!!
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